Representation Feedback - I would like ot see more detailed research into the genre you are studying (horror) What are the stereotypical characters, give examples from each and think in depth about representations in horror.
Audience Feedback - Some decent secondary research - but I would like you to drill deeper please. Look at the BFI Statistical yearbook 2013 and look at which age group liked your genre, which gender it appeals to etc. screen grab some graphs etc and broaden this research out. We will also be doing some theory to add to this post. This should help you move into a level 3/4.
Genre Feedback - This is excellent targeted feedback Joe. You have tailored your research to find influences that you can incorporate into your own work. This is at a level 3 at the moment - but I would like you to add some history or the genre into this poet to improve further.
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