January feedback

Research and Planning - 15

Planning and research is complete, and at times detailed. There is some proficient research into potential target audiences, including a look at demographics, audience reception theory etc. There is excellent research into similar products and some proficient planning, including scripts (although this doesn't follow conventions), schedules, shot lists, and an excellent storyboard. The organisation of locations including a recce etc is excellent and shows a great deal of planning on this project.

Main Task – 57

The tone is set stylishly in this simple but sophisticated film opening. There is an excellent variety of camera movements, tilts and pans, as well as some creative and excellent framing, notably the dead body arm in the foreground while the antagonist approaches. The credits follow conventions and keep pace with the slow but sophisticated pace. There is a clear narrative and the editing is excellent with a clear build up of sequences and match on actions. This is clearly fulfilling the task set and meaning is conveyed through editing, the sophisticated soundscape and editing.